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SkinFurA wet nose touches my cheekHer tongue, delicateThinHonest emotion"I'm here"Her body pressed against meTouch telling me"I'm here"Always here"You aren't alone"Fur SkinEmbracing
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That was really good. Thanks for sharing with us.
Yes thank you for sharing.
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QUOTE (silverwolf1 @ Mar 16 2004, 12:33 AM) SkinFurA wet nose touches my cheekHer tongue, delicateThinHonest emotion"I'm here"Her body pressed against meTouch telling me"I'm here"Always here"You aren't alone"Fur SkinEmbracing uhhhhhhhh.... thank you for sharing Silverwolf..... "honest emotion"..... indeed!!!
Honest emotion....So true!
So few words - so much meaning...Nice as allways! Thanks for sharing!
great poem, short but good
Very good, liked that ...If I may be permitted a suggestion maybe "always here" should have been "always there" ?Just a thoughtDrac
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Great words, and very touching. It astounds me that people have there "pets" and do not understand the love and affection they selflessly impose upon them. More often it is pushed aside, or kept it the back yard as a token.
QUOTE (dracunculus @ Mar 18 2004, 12:50 AM) Very good, liked that ...If I may be permitted a suggestion maybe "always here" should have been "always there" ?Just a thoughtDrac I like the suggestion, and have changed it in the original. Unfortunately, I can't edit the original post, so cannot change that. Dunno why there isn't an edit button for a post I made....
Thanks all fer the kind comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
How long did that take you. We should have a poetry section...
beautiful! thanks for sharing it with us ^_^
QUOTE (Shadow @ Mar 21 2004, 06:00 PM) How long did that take you. We should have a poetry section... Most of my poetry is written "on the spot" while visiting a forum or other area of conversation. None have taken me long to write, the longest took about 1/2 hour if I remember right, and the fastest (also IMO my best) "Dream" was written in responce to a challenge issued on a talker years ago to write the best poem in a 5 minute space of time, w/o editing. I've not edited or changed that one, but have editing the one I spent the most initial writing time on several times, and still hate it."Embracing" above, took me about 15 minutes.I agree we should set up a poetry section, and a non-beast story section for those stories that do not concentrate on the physical alone. Perhaps an offer to moderate such sections ourselves would encourage its establishment...
Very good loved it.
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